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 JUSTIN SULLIVAN French original promo flyer 2002 New Wave Goth Cold US $6.99 
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Is my text correct? I am French!?
Could you say that?
"Then, we can see that the photo is not really linked to the title. We can realize that thanks to the London Evening Standard, but the most striking example can be founded in the newspaper called "Metro" (the equivalent of ours). Indeed, we can see a pinguin, therefore when you first see that, you may think that the subject is gonna be be environment or a stuff like that. Actually the photo illustrates the fact that there was a cold wave through the city. A funny photo is used to illustrating a meteo fact... British humour I guess! I think it would be unbelievable to find that kind of photo in a free French newspaper which are more straight than English one"
thanks a lot !!
One of your answerers says that she is "a english teacher learning french." I really think that she should have written "an English teacher who is learning French". So, no marks for that, Miss!
This is how your text should be written:
"Then we can see that the photograph is not really linked to the title. We can see that, thanks to the London Evening Standard, but the most striking example can be found in the newspaper called 'Metro' (the equivalent of ours). Indeed, we can see a penguin, so, when we first see that, we may think that the subject is going to be the environment or something similar. Actually, the photograph illustrates the fact that there was a cold spell in the city. A funny photograph is used to illustrate a meteorological fact. British humour, I guess! I think that it is difficult to believe that that kind of photograph could be found in a free French newspaper, because such newspapers are more serious than are the English ones."
Please note my punctuation, and copy it out exactly. I have not scattered punctuation marks around like an old-fashioned sower scattered his seed. My punctuation marks are carefully placed.
I hope that this is of some help to you.
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